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HUMANITY PARAGRAPH

There are many pros and cons about how we act and function in the world, not to mention society in general. For thousands of years human beings have evolved to create civilizations, and from there we advanced to industrialization and colonization of not only our our own earth but space aswell. Since the dawn of time our thumbs set us apart from all other animals on earth and our brains allowing us to think. For every up side there is a down side balancing out the universe. Being human means to feel, to love, and to think. With out our feelings we wouldn't be human. We would be robots with out any emotions. Our emotions are wonderful but also are the cause of wars and death, power and greed. They also give side to a much lighter side of human thinking, like being kind and generous, loving caring. In conclusion i believe emotions are what make us human and what it means to be human is to live life as fully and freely as possible !

SOme great ideas here Elijah! Clearly spelling is an issue for you so make sure you proof read carefully and do not rely on a spell checker!

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